What is good? - Ammended Design Boards + Re-written Brief

Here is the brief I have re-written up in response to the workshop we had today for tomorrow. although we had feedback on our idea and boards today we are going to repeat the process in different groups tomorrow with a fresh start and stronger concept.

Brief

Amended boards

I got around to making the changes to the design boards. I didn't have to make massive changes so it didn't take too long to do them again. I changed pretty much everything that got brought up within the crit.