Wednesday 27 February 2013

What is good? - Concept Pitch Feedback

I was in the 11 o'clock group which gave me time to print my design boards off again. Lucky as I didnt have any print credit when it came to printing. I was first to present my work. I am happy with how I presented the concept as I feel I came across confident and translated what I was thinking to the rest of the group.

My design boards didn't get any criticism which is always good!

I didnt really recieve any feedback on my concept apart from that I should review my audience on the brief I wrote last night, as a few words I have used to describe the audience could be considered vague. For example the describing word enthusiast. I meant museum/gallery enthusiasts but this needs specifying further. The last bit of advice was that I should research my topic further which I am doing anyway. I have a lot of content but I couldn't put it all on my boards or there would be too much information.

Next time I will write a script again because it really helped today. It helped by making me sound coherent and efficient when communicating the information. I should of defined perception in more detail because if you are not aware what perception is to begin with a brief explanation may not be enough to understand, but with three minutes to present it is hard to be extremely thorough.


To do

I will re-write my brief once I have researched who my target audience is. There is no point re-writing the brief if I still dont know who the audience is. To further research my audience I am going to do some  primary research by going to the Royal Armouries in leeds. This gallery is free and I heard on recommendation that is has some interesting stuff in there. I am also going to go the Leeds City Museum.

I am also going to do some web research to see if I can find any old studies on the audiences of art galleries, museums and science centers. I really need to nail my audience before I can continue with general research.

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